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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Kate v. Zane

    Hello, my name is Kate. This was pretty well written! Although, I have a few comments: “Please stay?” she pulls her bangs out of her eyes 'she' would not be ...

    Oct 22, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Drowning. After the break up.

    Hello, Katie here. :) Good job! Levan caught most of the grammatical errors. So, I won't bother being repetitive. I felt bad for Andre, but his anger threw off the ...

    Oct 21, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Forest of Secrets

    Hello, I'm Kate. This was pretty well written! You did a good job at describing what was happening now, but just as the others said, it raises many questions and ...

    Oct 20, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Strange Love III-The butterfly effect

    This is well written. Great job! I am a "newbie",and have never written a review before. But here it goes. You definitely made me feel sympathy for X and Y. ...

    Oct 19, 2009


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