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Nice job! I like the desriptiveness of this poem. I liked most of the flow and could see Buddah screaming. :lol: Anyways... Okay, now onto the critiques... Scalded tongue and ...

Thank you so much guys! I appreciate all your reviews! I'm so glad that all of you liked it. don't really know everything about American lifestyle (I am from India) ...

I agree with you on the reading the stories part! I get an idea for a story then I try writing it and fail completely. Well, not all the time.... ...

So, this is a story I got inspired to write last night. I was remebering a poem I wrote not too long ago and thought that it would be better ...

wow, nice chapter. no major mistakes in this one. a few spelling errors is all. please update soon!

Alright...This is going to be a chapter out of a book I am writing. Not quite sure where it is going to go, but...If you any comments, please post them. ...

Hello Sourkrout! Welcome to Young Writers Society. I look forward to seeing some of your works. I am also new here and am not quite familiar with this site, but ...

I just finished reading The House of The Scorpion by Nancy Farmer. I thought it was a fantastic book. Nancy addresses the issue on clones and I loved how she ...

Very emotional poem. I also agree ChernobyllyInclined. It isn't very original, but it was a good start. Try to add some metaphors and describe what it feels like to be ...

This is my first completed poem. I hope there are not too many errors. Please critique! Thanks!!!! :D Hero She sits back in her chair, Remembering the old days. The ...

Sorry everyone. I tried to get on the computer this week but it wasn't really working. Thanks for all the help. You're not very talkative, are you? Hehe, actually I ...

Hey everyone, I joined yesterday and wanted to say Hi. I like to write, obviously, and can't wait to read and write some stories! Can't wait to meet some new ...