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OMG! The first one is hilarious! A dog in the no dogs allowed spot! :P Pooh Bear is a gangsta. With all those ladies...Shame! :D What is the third picture ...

Haha! Omg, this is so random and weird! So all he is doing is running and then half his body falls off. That is kind of sad. I feel for ...

This poem sort of reminds of something Dr. Seuss would write! Fantastic! I love made up words. They are my favorite! As blue mountain loomed near, I think blue mountain ...

This is my first ever song that I have tried to write. Your help would be greatly appreciated. And I hope you like it, too! :) Why Can't You See? ...

Oh my gosh! Such a sad song. I can actually sort of relate to the girl in this song. There were a few spelling errors that you should change. They ...

Hey, afterthought! This is a very good poem! Just a few fixes on this. I think that you should put one sentence for each line. It was all kind of ...

Welcome! Usually the more depressing stuff is the best. I'm not one for writing it, though I have tried, and it seems to get things off your back. Can't wait ...

Wow. Really good photos! :) In the first photo, I can see your outline. I'm not sure how to prevent this, because I have done it many time, but maybe ...

Ah, a very sarcastic like poem. Nice! I treat people with such hospitality, I clearly say "Welcome to Our Home", Maybe take out the such. It just doesn't fit there. ...

I'm not familiar with this type of poem, but from what I saw, it was quite good. You definitely described stars and their wonder. I don't think you really need ...

Okay, first of all, great poem! Such a sad ending. =[ You started rhyming in the second stanza. Then the rest of your poem was free form. That was really ...

Hmm...Great poem you have here. Not much to comment on, but let's see what I can do! ;) and horizons just a figment of my eye Okay...Well, a figment of ...

Haha, wow! This really made me laugh. Even though I am a Twilight fan, though not an Edward lover, I found this to be true. She DOES use the word ...

A random poem I was inspired to write while eating pancakes. =] Yum, yum! Pancakes are yummy. Pancakes are good. Would you like to try some? I think that you ...

For your first poem, this was great! It was very well written and gave hope. I really like the third and the last stanza. Very emotional and vivid imagery. Great ...