writerwithacause

Your poem is nice and you have some good figures of sppech. Here are a few corrections I've made: Rain drops are falling outside my open window - I believe ...

Here is my suggestion: It's raining again, but Why do I feel so sad when it rains? Rich droplets slide down my face , - I would have used another ...

Not bad, it is simple... but you could have worked on the rhyme and rhythm a little more. I am not praising rhyme in any way, as there are many ...