writerwithacause

Looking up , eyes brimming with tears ; Looking back at all those years ... Years with great joy , happiness abound ; Years with great sorrow that love turned ...

I’ll catch it in my hands and save it in a jar for when I need a wish I’ll have my fallen star I'd wish to taste your lips that ...

Everything was done fast and neatly, the routine imprinted in my bones. The M ornings weren’t my best moments. From the moment you had to turn off the annoying beep ...

Immortal wings on hence thy fly, High above the world you soar; These are the lines that I loved the most, the reason why I decided to read your poem ...

Well, well, this sounds like a song, I felt some melody coming from the poem because of the line that repeats throughout the poem. The rhyme, however, could be improved. ...

This was so simple, yet so profound. Mrs. Elizabeth Darcy is perfectly right, I think anybody can relate to this feeling. :) I didn't mind the fact that your rhyme ...

I glanced up absentmindedly, And with unfocused eyes, I gazed out of the window, To where ‘‘the true world lies.’’ I think that "true" instead of "real" works better with ...

This was better than the last poems I've reviewed before. I especially like this part: Oh the warmth of day dream, The joy of numbing bliss, The tango of thought, ...

First of all, "I don't know what you're talking about," I said, my face now blushing furiously as I took a sudden interest in my shoes. "We don't even like ...

Take it easy, hun, you know people will still reply or not reply even if you "threat" them. :P Anyway, it was a nice poem, I wish it would have ...

And you didn’t understand what I meant. It was just another math problem that didn’t make sense, so you tore it in half and tossed it away. Then we moved ...

Months have passes since them a and now I am alone. They all left me out, out of fear or compassion. I will soon be the shadows, those poisonous black ...

It ' s a fiery feeling started by those deep brown eyes Yes it ' s something unbelievable Something our imaginations make Yes it ' s something unbelievable Something our ...

Nice, can't comment on it so much, but... found a mistake here: Trust is so worth acheiving. It should be "achieving". I thought that this line: (Hey look that rhymes!) ...

Hello there! Julie here to review! :) First, As I'm writing this it's raining. have the window above my desk cracked open and the smell of the rain is coming ...