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I really like this poem, the punctuation and capitalism are used very well also. I really couldn't suggest what would be needed to improve it. Although I'm not a big ...

Hello I am going to review your poem. RED: corrections/opinions/errors BLACK: normal Black paints the most colorful sunsets, sorry to say but this doesn't quite make sense as sunsets are ...

Hello, I am going to review your story/poem. Well i thought that you did use your words in a clever way. You kept the story entertaining through out the story ...

To be honest, I didn't find this poem to be that great. You chose a subject that you hate yet you don't go in depth of your feelings or emotions. ...

This would be categorised in a 'short story,' the spelling could use improvement also. However I think this story has great potential and I would love to see similar stories ...

Im not really a fan of repeating the 'i cried' etc. but in this poem i thought it was necessary. Unlike all your other poems this one comes to me ...

Unlike some other poems i have read recently, this poem had caught my eye. Good grammer, good plot and i could easily tell what you are talking about. The text ...

Unlike some other people, I thoroughly enjoyed this short story. It included many unique elements into making it a good shortstory. Some improvements could improve more descriptions in your sentences,

to be honest i wasn't expecting much coming into this with the title 'school assignment' etc. :P but to be honest it was a well written poem and i do ...

wow, that was a really great poem in my opinion. i couldn't say anything negative about that, im sure many people will know how it feels in your position. Although ...

From your poem this is how i received it; its about you or someone else not dreaming anymore as it wont come true, you remind yourself that you used to ...