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When did I start feeling the weight of the world? When did the world get so cold? Why did I have to break your heart? I like that first stanza, ...

I really love the poem. Short concise lines, it doesn't always have to be long to be good. I like the last stanza the most. "We’re so opposite, Other. We’re ...

That is a very good poem. It made me think and I love it when anything I read makes me think. I especially, like Jiggity, like the origami birds comparison. ...

I actually liked that poem and right now I'm wondering if I'm really simplistic of mind or if those other people are wrong. Not every poem has to be complicated ...

That poem WAS good. If this is what you can do with a quick five minute poem I wonder... But poems that are inspired from something will usually be better. ...

I don't usually like rhyming poems with two line rhyming, but you actually made it sound good. I especially liked this stanza: Your charm, your wit, your lies, your danger, ...

I think that was a heart felt poem. It is not necessarily every time that the reader has to be included in the story. Being an objective viewer on the ...