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Hey there! I think this story does have some potential - you began to build up some great tension and I could sense how worried the MC (main character) was, ...

Hey Lena! Thanks for the PM. So, once again, I enjoyed reading this. I love the fact that it's written using dialect - I can really imagine the chacrater's talking ...

Hey there anime! I'm sad to say that these pieces are so true. I'm not sad that you wrote them well - congrats on that! - it's just that I ...

Hey there! First off, I have to say that I love your avvie; Paramore is one of my favourite bands :) That aside, I loved this story. The concept was ...

Hey there! This was a great read. You wrote in the present tense well and as a consequence the piece flowed well. I don't really have anything fresh to say, ...

Hey Catri! I'm glad you've started posting this story again. It's been ages since I read and reviewed the first parts! Now, the nit-piks have already been pointed out, so ...

Hey anime! I am soo jealous of you right now. I am nowhere near starting my story for this contest. In fact, I barely have a plot... But anyway, as ...

Hey there! First off, I know how you feel. Most of the time I feel like I'm stuck between a rock and a hard place. I constantly feel like I'm ...

Hey there Skins! I wasn't going to review anything today, 'cause I'm feeling lazy :P But then I saw this and got really exited because I wanted to know what ...

Hey there! A delayed welcome to YWS is in order :) I hope you have an amazing time on this website! Now, as for a review, I don't think I ...

Hey there! I saw that this was featured so I thought I'd take a gander. And I'm glad I did. Like others have said in previous reviews, this is so ...

Hey there! I'm almost never in the poetry forums because I'm shocking at writing poems. They never seem to rhyme properly and they're always awkwardly worded. But, for a fellow ...

Hey Otherone! I only just spotted this today. If I'd have noticed it before then I would have gotten to it a lot sooner. So. I liked this. It was ...

Hey there! I definitely agree with the other reviewers in that this has potential but it just needs to be fleshed out a little more. I want to know more ...

Hey again! I'm back to review this part for you. I read it yesterday but didn't have time to review, and it seems that Lilicia has beat me to it ...