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It seems like you have an interesting cast of characters here x) I think it would be cool to see how they develop as the story goes on. My biggest ...

Ah, I see x) Be sure to edit those in there, then! I've been drawing an original character and might upload that sometime next week, so I'll give you a ...

Alright, I'm giving this another look trying to spot more spelling mistakes As hard as it tries I maintain my grip, and in a howl of fury the dragon throws ...

Ah, I understand now x) So it's not just the city, it's a whole area of the country that they dubbed 'New York'. Hm, I probably missed the explanation, but ...

As I slowly come to my senses I hear the alarm starting, its cry creepy and makes you fill with fear. here, you change into second person by saying 'you'. ...

Alright so i just read through the ending again and I have to say I like this version as much as I did the last one ^_^ they are both ...

Before long, he had a small fire burning on a sheet of thin metal and was preparing Violet's bed for the night. She watched the flames in silence, her Teddy ...

he sighed, and rested her chin on her small hands, elbows on the table. The waiter was a little uncomfortable, as he knew that it was time to lock up, ...

Or maybe not. xD I'll finish this one. Violet shuddered when a cold wind whipped up around them. He wrapped her tighter in blankets and held her closer ad he ...

I could tell ;) And thanks! I'm so glad I'm helping. And it helps my reviewing skills when my reviews are critiqued as well! :D So thanks!

I flippin love you for editing ^_^ For year and years I had whole heatedly believed that somehow, somewhere, there was life in a completely unknown place. I think I ...

Great! Of course, I'll get to it asap :)

It was no problem! I enjoyed reviewing it x) After reading chapter one, I feel like his loneliness is directly related to his lack of family. He seems to be ...

ahaha. You guys, it might be easier if you made a new thread for each chapter x)

Hey I'm back :) I assume this is the paragraph you added- I lingered around the house for a few more moments before decided to go back to my tree. ...