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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Serrated Sidewalk

    I haven't have time to double check since I got all of the comments (thank you by the way for those) but I don't doubt there are tense mistakes. I'll ...

    Oct 22, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In Darkest Night

    as E.B. White once said "Be obscure clearly".

    Oct 20, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In Darkest Night

    my teacher once taught me something that might help you. when writing poetry you can't just be all philosophical, or else the audience is lost. big balloon words such as ...

    Oct 20, 2007


akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
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