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Wow. This is a very complex lyrics,in a good kind of way. I think it's good to express our feeling through long lyrics like this cause those strong emotions just ...

Wow. This is so impressive! I liked it a lot. :D I like how this is so well-written and the words are nicely chosen. And I like the repetition lines ...

I find it hard to breathe These thoughts that torture me by day; And nightmares that poison me by night But I can’t seem to recall Am I still beside ...

and a funeral held in your name This is my favorite line. :D

Nah,this one is very well written. I loved it very much. I found that it is 'uniquely' written. I mean I'm okay reading the whole story without the dialogues though. ...

Hi there. So this is your very first post here in YWS. I think you have a very sweet message in your poem. And I love the simplicity you put ...

Nah,I didn't expect this to happen. Now I sit here, with a sword to my throat... But,this is a good story. People would do anything to be with someone they ...

You should make it longer. Nice story line by the way! :)

I love the meaning of your poem. It somehow reminds me of a poem The Road Not Taken. Nothing's the same but it conveys the message of choices and decisions ...

Hey there! I think you have a very sweet message in your poem. I could tell that a father is supposedly can be described as a Knight and that you ...

Hey there. I think your poem is pretty good,and I think you have done it beautifully in questioning your views of life. This is my favorite. [quoteWhich came first? Black ...

I agree with Daisuki. The poem gives me an overall picture of vampires,specifically. I was not scarred by you; I was merely trained, twisted into something sweetly fierce, a doe-eyed ...

Honestly,I instantly know that this is going to be a great poem the moment I read its title. I love it, cause I'm a fan of Gothic literature too. :) ...

I would tell that everyone could relate so much with your poem because I'm feeling this loneliness thing too. Therefore,I love your poem! :D

Very well written! I feel like I'm reading a gothic poetry,which is stuffed with strong and brutal emotions you've got in your poem. And I'm looking forward for more works ...