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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Literature Re: Shadow of the Sun

    Hi! I'm here to review your poem. As far as I can see, the whole point is awesome. I mean, the whole thing of chasing your dream.... It's really cool. ...

    Mar 19, 2019


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien