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thnx guys this is really helpful emm no this is my first story and will i write any more i don't really know i understand that the poem needs lots ...

i love it as previously said its short and to the point i also like your choice of the words they are unique unusual but they add a personal touch ...

i love it it has so much feelings put there and i really like the topic keep on writing i wont comment again on the hoe issue