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youngtalentkritz

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: being born as a human

    umm...thank you for your feedback...!! and i'll keep that points in my head..!!:)

    Sep 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: a confession

    ummm....,actually,thanks for improving it for me..,and you'll soon hear from me..!!again..!!

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: ok

    the awesomest short poem..,i have ever heard or read...!!the last line of the poem is very inspiring and beautiful..,,"happiness is my shield"..!!i bet it is..!! good luck...,you're awesome..!!

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A New Morning After Another Night...

    a very nicely phrased poem indeed...!! it actually inspired me to write a beautiful poem...!! keep the good work going on...all the best..!!

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: a confession

    thnx for appreciating my l'il effort....!! 'n i'll keep that points in my head..,,you pointed out..,next tym..!! for now.,i apologise..'n asks you for continuosly criticize my work..'n help me improve

    Sep 18, 2011


The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
— TheMythMaster