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This was great. I love how the words flowed with the music. It was different; good different. Very emotional. I loved the romantic engagement at the end. He obviously loves ...

Oooo! This is getting good. How mysterious! I like the fact that Gaby has started to question, causing Damien/Will to give us more background on what happened to Denise. It ...

Hey! It's me again. This was good. I like the storyline. However, there's a few things you may want to watch out for. First, I wasn't sure whether Damien was ...

Hey! It's Dinkeroo! Sorry it took me so long. I got sick, and it turned out to be the flu. Blah. It wasn't fun. Anywho... On to the critique! I ...

Great begining! I loved the way you let us relate to the main character first before dropping the "new guy" bomb! That was really effective. Also, I like how you ...

Youreit here, ready to review! This was a very interesting piece. I liked the forbidden love, and I thought you displayed that very well. Bethany is a very interesting character, ...

I liked this piece. It was easy to relate to. I think most girls have had at least one guy like her only for what she looks like, and this ...

This sent chills down my spine. Literally. I loved the last line, and the way you made the last line separate was perfect. I can't tell you much that could ...

A baby? I guess I should've seen this coming, but whatever. You wrote this well. I enjoyed it. Her reaction seems fairly realistic. I have absolutely no experience with this ...

Aww! How romantic! Although I was expecting a ring... A necklace is nice, too, though. It just would have been sweeter if he was proposing. I loved the way you ...

I really liked it, and I disagree with the people above me who said it was paced too fast. I think that it was just right, and I liked the ...

I liked this chapter. I enjoyed the whole good vs. evil thing that you have going. But I do agree with Maddy that she should have showed more emotion. Other ...

This piece was very interesting. I felt like it could have been an excerpt from a novel, almost as if you pulled it out of the middle of the story. ...

You did an absolutely amazing job with that chapter! Wow! I'm still reeling from it. I loved the twist that turned this whole story upside down! I never in a ...

I enjoyed this chapter. I think you portrayed the feeling that a girl gets when she loves someone who is completely wrong for her, but can't understand why wonderfully. It ...