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Re: Confessions of a neglected child
I like how deep this was. It caught my attention but did not seem overly flamboiyant. keep posting, but work on your punctuation. I like poetry but i am sadly ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Lightheart - Chapter 1 - Part 1 (Edited)
This is an extremely good story. I liked how you didn't take time to explain who she was and what she was like you just let it flow. You might ...
Jan 3, 2011