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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Year of the Rip: Prologue

    I really liked this, it's tense and you left it off at such a good note. Just one thing, say "It's contents splashing across the floor" instead of "splashed.I guess ...

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: To Judge

    It's actually good that you vent anger through poetry, because it makes it more powerful and innovative. Nowadays a lot of people get judged by the most mundane things, so ...

    Dec 10, 2014


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