zeldalex

Hey Honora! First of all, thank you so much for sticking with each chapter. It means a lot to have a consistent reader :). The sentence length...yeah, I agree with ...

Hi Kostia! Thank you so much for your review: I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed my writing style, and I definitely agree that yeah, I have a problem with ...

Hi EagleFly! I appreciate you stopping by. The dots at the beginning are a little strange, and since that's the second comment I got about that it's definitely a mistake ...

Hey Honora! Whoops, I could have sworn I wrote a reply to this, but here I am, a little late. Thank you for the review! Also, yeah it's a little ...

(Sorry! I accidentally messed up and posted my review as a normal comment. I can't seem to delete this, so that's a little embarrassing on my part. My bad!)

Hello! I'm glad you enjoyed the descriptions: I was worried about getting a little ramble-y, so I'm glad it worked out. Also yeah the parenthesis are a definitely a habit ...

Hello! Thank you for this review! What I will say is that why Taijinn is leaving become clear later on, but you are right: that's something that should be established ...

Also, I doubt I have the time to go through and fix all the changes, so it might not change, but I will keep it in mind for future writing.

Thank you very much! I've had people tell me my work is oddly- A.K.A. not- spaced. But now I know how to do it! Thank you!

This is really inspirational. I admire all the references in here.