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Is this what your really planning to say?

Splendid! quite amuseing indeed. but it does not completly ryme as you probibly already know. :D

Tank you. For reading the whole thing. Could you be more specific. You need to read it with a open mind like it was a comedy. All the real people ...

Its okay but certainly not top quality. Nice enuoph.

Very good other than that you had waiting for a new day once the new day had already come, catch my drift?

What can i say? I like the word "guerrilla." Thats it for me. :D

Then my dear boy, i wuold be forced to kill you.

God, DQ, i know everything i posted is total crud, don't keep saying its ok, i love harsh crits (with the exeption of my book, but that got deleted for ...

Basicaly i wrote three peoms in a row just cause i felt like it. They are all lame.

Well then. I see someone hasn't been takeing there pills. Other than the fact your insane, good job.

That was interesting... well then I suppose I enjoyed it was coherent sorry about the way i am typing

:shock: One word: agony you decide what i mean cause i can't

Don't worry about it. Many people write storys with no knowlege. Me, for example. :D Good story! mutters* i hate horses

Brilliant! Exraorinary!! Fantastic! Humor! It made my lauph, it made me cy. I was amused. Reminds me of the peom about the owl and the pussy cat. :lol:

poor ari! :cry: I suppose i willl continue my list I will do my hardcovers/fist aditions today: ***Abarat; Days of Magic Nights of War ***Abarat by Clive Barker (read these! ...