zell

i liked it had a nice flow to it i liked this bit With a Twist-o-flex he’d break it down His legs of jelly were town renown He’d do the ...

just abit confusing i liked it though confusing but intresting

intresting i liked it especially this bit Hmph…” grunted the man, raising his eyebrows. Suddenly, another hand shot up, eagerly waving for attention. The Master nodded his assent that i ...

thanks randomian

i think it was very brilliant i think it had a good enough flow as it is i perticuly liked this bit I'll never get the chance to say it ...

that is a doo doo poem so rubbish you have to quit because you are a b**** honestly stag you should really watch your language stag (i know i've already ...

thats good zellert how do i give points umm by the way i'm called zell not zellert silly boy

i like it the way it is its funky and well thats my opion anyway

(i had a tune from that) i liked that alot have you got any guitar tunes or bass lines for that just for a matter of intrest :mrgreen:

i like both but i have to say harry potter cause its easier to read and the movie isn't that bad either

brilliant haiku bent i take it its about how good the world is and thanking god

i don't think it needs changing its alright i suppose infact i think its better than alright its very good

thats brilliant i liked the bit when you wrote But i've fallen out of love with you And there's nothing i can do. i liked the rhyme you and do ...

i know how you feel this is like what happens in my room

lol very good a bit weird at the start but hey thats my point of veiw anyway :D