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Hello there :) I had no problem with you vocabulary, I thought it was just right. I'm going to take a wild guess and say this 'fire' is rage deep ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) Your poem is pretty straight forward. I really liked the concept and the whole message, which is some pretty relatable stuff. However, I ...

Hello there :) First of all, I was drawn to this poem by the title. Although the poem is very witty and different, to me it was just too simple. ...

Hello there :) I generally loved the power this poem possessed. I liked how you kept a consistent rhythm. My one and only problem was the overuse or too many ...

Hello there :) I'm also kind of tired of these posts. They actually have made everything so much complicated because of all the different opinions and the fighting is just ...

Hello, hello and hello! Since I joined this site, I've never really formally introduced myself. --My real name is Tshetsana...yeah, I'm pretty sure you've went over that a couple of ...

Hello there 'dude' :) Since you're an avid reviewer, I felt almost obliged to review one of your works. Anyway, on to the review. I really like the mood you ...

Hello there :) I thought that this was very choppy, all of it. Firstly, for an introductory piece, I am not drawn in. I mean, if this is a novel, ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I actually found no problem with the length. You seem to have covered every nook and cranny in the information department. Sometimes, as ...

Hello there :) The previous reviewer probably covered what I wanted to say. The first two paragraphs of the story are actually quite fact based. I couldn't tell whether I ...

Hey. Thank you both for taking time and reviewing my poem. So, I shall sit and observe For I will get my turn... One day. For some reason, this just ...

Hello there :) I could really relate to this poem. I actually find myself with the same feelings on occasion. What I liked about it is how it transcended from ...

Hello there inbetweener :) First of all, I need to get myself a camera because taking pictures, looks like fun! On to the review, I agree with Justagirl on this ...

Hey. So I haven't written a poem in a long while so today, I decided to force one out no matter what. People think it’s right, When I fall into ...

Hello there :) I kind of liked the poem. The idea was well thought out and you managed to make it into words without it being completely disastrous. There were ...