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Hello there :) I'm here as requested ;) I just want to let you know that this is my first review as a reviewer 2 badge holder, so I hope ...

Hello there :) I'm here as requested. Melanie Holbrook climbed out of her second floor window and sat down on the cool, black slanted roof beneath her. Every night she ...

Hello there :) Thank you for requesting my services. I'm not much of a poet but I'll try my best to give you a helpful review ;) When we're apart... ...

Hello there butterfinger :) First of all, I've been there too; I still am! ;) I really like the concept of your poem. It's very light (and written as so) ...

Hello there :) Here as requested. First thing I'd like to touch on before I begin is spacing! I think you understand what I mean by that. So, on to ...

Hello there :) Wow, looks like I'm a little late but I'll try not to mention what has already been mentioned by other reviewers. ;) “You can’t just leave in ...

Hello there :) I'm here as requested. I'll try not to repeat too much of what's already been mentioned by previous reviewers ;) Before I get into the reviewing, you ...

Hello there :) I finally made it. So this is a pretty dark subject, I admire the honesty! Asking myself what just happened, And I tell myself... I don't know ...

Hello there :) Now It's dark, but I'm hear . Don't cry. Until the waters drained Summer's almost over. Ain't that good? I think you confused your seasons over here ...

Hello there :) I was sixteen when I found out that I was kidnapped at the age of five. All I knew was that I had been 'adopted' at the ...

Hello there :) I thought I'd step up and do the honours! I'm not going to do any crushing, but I am going to be nitpicky ;) “Wow Kalypso, you’re ...

Hello there :) So on the bright side, your writing is really good. Like I was honestly enjoying your effortless flow of words and how you described certain things. However, ...

Hello there :) So I thought this was not that bad. So cold, and my little hold, cannot contain me…. I especially enjoyed the little repetition you had going on ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) As the moom casts a spell on the land. Dance to the wolf's own song As he sings to his one lady fair. ...

Hello there Hello there :) Oh, and welcome to YWS! :) his eyes so innocent, but yet it burns like a fire in the night, staring ever so deep into ...