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Nice! xD

Hey. Thank you for the review :) And yes, the old man goes to the back and another guy hurries in before it leaves. I think I should mention the ...

Hey GoldFlame. This is a lovely review and thank you so much for the feedback. To answer some of your questions: "the rain's purpose", this I want the reader to ...

Oooh Tam! Thank you so much for this review. I like OCD Tam ;) This review is so helpful and I appreciate it. I did notice that I began a ...

Oooh! Thank you, hehe :)

Oooh! Thank you, hehe :)

Hey LMJ Thank you for your review. I've taken it, chewed on it and now it's stored away in my head for next time. Thank you :D

Hey Slushyslapped. Thank you so much for the detailed review, I appreciate it and take your suggestions to heart. "I don't know how to call it..." The "how" here is ...

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^

Thank you all for your comments ^_^

Hello there OceanofDreams :) Welcome to YWS!!!! I will start with what I didn't like about this piece. First of all, the chunky first paragraph is a huge issue for ...

Helllo there :) First of all, what a lovely story. I enjoyed the effortless flow and the romance, and I was actually emotionally involved. I loved how the story was ...

Thank you all for the wonderful input. :)

Thank you all :)

Hey lilgrendots. :) Yes, this is much better. I actually found it to be more gutsy and bold than the last one. Also, this proves that the narrator can be ...