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Yes I was a little hesitant to place this in Romantic Short story since it's not really romantic until the end. I might add on to it, but I kept ...

Thanks Katelyn, I'm glad you enjoyed that. I worked on this piece a bit more after the comments I got, but I haven't really expanded it. I'll let you know ...

Thanks for pointing out the mistakes. :) And for enjoying my work. I'll let you know if I add to it. It'll probably take a while, though, I have a ...

Thanks for the reviews! Kaedee: I must admit that when you told me I should extend the ending I didn't think I could do much with it, but it turns ...

Thanks to you both for the reviews! :D I'll keep in mind the recommendations. NumberSeven,you're the second person to point out that the description of the hug sounds strange, so ...

Mechi: I'm really glad that you like my writing style, and thanks especailly for your comment on my dialougue. I think dialougue is really one of the best ways to ...

Appale: Thanks for the critique! I'll take into consideration the substituting the said (but I must say, "said" is better sometimes :D ), and I will revise the grammar. I'm ...

Thank you both for your reviews! I find them really helpful. You're especially right about the ellipsis. :shock: Kind to think about it, I do use them a lot. And ...

Thank you for the reviews. I'll take into consideration your suggestions. However, I will like to defend my story by saying that this is not the whole story, perhaps my ...