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  • Poetry » Health, General Re: fragile

    I really like this poem, the concept is used very often but I liked the use of words in this one. Something I really liked was the end where you ...

    Feb 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: A Parent's Lessons

    Good poem, but some things I noticed were that the bad only happens with the mom it seems a bit one sided but that is just my opinion. Overall I ...

    Feb 27, 2015


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites