~Lashes~

“Hey! Yeah, you move.” Said a man with long unruly grey hair and a face you don’t want to look at. Is it suppose to sound odd when the man ...

First of all I'm not good at critiquing, but I will do my best! I liked the last line the best. I thought it was pretty clver when you said ...

I was cracked before you And I was shattered after you FOr some reason, this was my favorite line. It also flowed really well. The whole song was pretty good ...