~Volant~

I'm pretty satisfied with characterization, plot development, dialogue, and descriptions. But I tend to majorly fail with flow. Sometimes it works out, sometimes it flat out flops over like a ...

Lots of writers feel the way. It's a writer's equivolent of hitting The Wall (an athelete's term meaning the point in the sport where you feel completely hopless and unable ...

Thanks! Like I said, it's just an idea...I was toying with the idea of making Hannah a professor in a boarding school and one of her students are dead....I dunno. ...

All in all, I liked it. I liked it a lot. It could use some cleaning up; info dumps and some imagery and flow issues. I can tell, though, that ...

Thanks very much! Yeah, I kind of tried to shift the attention of of Hannah and onto Jason...All I want the reader to know about her is that she can ...

No, no, I don't mind. Everyone, when they review, tend to "rewrite" things, and some of the things I agree with. It tells me your suggestions in the context of ...

Oh....thanks, guys. XD I feel special, and someone had better give my ego a good pop before my head swells too much. hahahahahahaha!!!! lol Editted again, because I'm still not ...

Okay, over the summer, my friends and I want to do this movie thing. My friend wants to be a director, I want to be a writer, and everyone else ...

The tale I give, which will outlive All those whose fates entwine it, Will tell you of the strangest love Of those that try define it. For none can say ...

Hey, I'm writing a science fiction story, and I have two questions: 1) Can you think of any cool sci-fi fan user names? So far I've only got LaserPhaser22 and ...

Pat Buchanan!! Always, always, always Pat Buchanan! :D

Pat Buchanan is so much a part of YWS, that it's pretty much the same answer as yes :D lol!

Hey, I have a character I need some help naming. She's somewhat the stereotypical girl pretending to be a boy and is a medieval squire, and I'm having trouble finding ...

Yes, actually. These eight characters are basically my seminary class condensed. Everyone has contributed a trait to one or more characters, except Brother Sanchez, who is my seminary teacher in ...

(Lights up on stage. In front of the closed curtain, two tables, four chairs each, are set across the stage with a blank chalkboard behind them. A portable cupboard sits ...