~nariel~

*Hugs KJ* Thank you! On the dialogue: Ugh. I hate doing punctuation for dialogue. I always get confused. Period or comma? I will, however, look something up online to help ...

Chosenofair: It's okay, no hurt feelings. Now, that I look back on it, my character has this 'woe is me' kind of voice. Ack, it wasn't what I was looking ...

Wow. I didn't expect this much feedback. Thank you all for your helpful reviews. I don't know when I'm going to be starting this up again. I just kind of ...

:) Ha ha. Yes that is much better. Sorry if I seemed too picky. It really is a great poem.

*Rolls eyes* This was so random yet so funny. I loved how you made fun of Bella. Weeeee ballerina!!! Hahahahahahahah. Good job. Nariel *GOLD STAR*

To tell you the truth, I completely forgot about this story. I almost screamed when I saw it. :oops: Thanks for your comment though and I'll TRY to write more ...

Ohhhhhh! Oops. *Facepalm* Sorry, that makes more sense now. That makes a ton more sense. Sorry bout that, ~N~

No need to apologize; we all make mistakes. It is very good. :)

Hey, great prologue. There is a rule on here about doing two reviews before you post something. Good work though and tell me when you post more. ~N~

Thanks for commenting! I understand now that I basically info dumped *face palm* I should have known better. Thanks again and I'll work harder at spreading all this stuff out. ...

Vernon: Now that I go back and read it, I do see that it's a little cliche. I'll try and make the wings more descriptive and original. To everyone else: ...

chocoholic: Thanks for your comments. This is a brand new piece. I decided to take a break on the other one. :) I'll try and add more descriptions in chapter ...

*Shivers* This was very good! The other reviewers caught you mistakes so I'm just going to tell you how good this is!!! I also just LOVED your opening sentence. It ...

Okay, I edited this up, taking in account what you guys said. I will start writing chapter one right away and thanks for the reviews. This will probably be the ...

Uh oh. It's working on my computer. I think you just click on it and it shows the spoilers. It was just basically talking about what happens in later chapters. ...