A New Light on a Distant Shot

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myfreindsavamp
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:52 pm
myfreindsavamp says... · Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:52 pm
Disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by myfreindsavamp on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
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myfreindsavamp
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Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:56 pm
myfreindsavamp says... · Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:56 pm
Disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by myfreindsavamp on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:45 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
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Stori
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Sat Jul 26, 2008 1:34 am
Stori says... · Sat Jul 26, 2008 1:34 am
It's real good. No mistakes that I can see, and you conveyed the characters' feelings well.
"The one thing you can't trade for your heart's desire is your heart."
Miles Vorkosigan

"You can be an author if you learn to paint pictures with words."
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myfreindsavamp
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Sat Aug 16, 2008 2:18 pm
myfreindsavamp says... · Sat Aug 16, 2008 2:18 pm
Disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by myfreindsavamp on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:46 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
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myfreindsavamp
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Tue Sep 09, 2008 11:38 am
myfreindsavamp says... · Tue Sep 09, 2008 11:38 am
disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by myfreindsavamp on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:46 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
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myfreindsavamp
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Mon Sep 29, 2008 11:47 am
myfreindsavamp says... · Mon Sep 29, 2008 11:47 am
Disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by myfreindsavamp on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
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myfreindsavamp
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Sat Oct 25, 2008 7:36 pm
myfreindsavamp says... · Sat Oct 25, 2008 7:36 pm
Disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by myfreindsavamp on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
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sibyis
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Mon Oct 27, 2008 12:36 pm
sibyis says... · Mon Oct 27, 2008 12:36 pm
From what I can read here, your story seems to have a great idea. It's unique, and the characters seem dynamic and able to convey feelings well in a refreshing manner. Your characters are not at all lifeless dolls. It's nice.
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righting
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Wed Oct 29, 2008 12:03 am
righting says... · Wed Oct 29, 2008 12:03 am
It was a good read... cool.
Always looking for a good book to read.
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myfreindsavamp
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Wed Oct 29, 2008 10:56 am
myfreindsavamp says... · Wed Oct 29, 2008 10:56 am
Disapearing for the time being.
Last edited by myfreindsavamp on Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:48 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
Quote

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