There are quite a few fantasy authors around the site (I count myself among them) so you won't be short of feedback. Do you mind if I ask what your book series is about?
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steampowered wrote:Welcome to YWS, Bloodbane! Fab username!
There are quite a few fantasy authors around the site (I count myself among them) so you won't be short of feedback. Do you mind if I ask what your book series is about?
I don' want to spoil it but all I can tell you is that it involves preventing the cataclysmic end of the first world.
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