At first, I thought @Mysticalxx being all futuristic and reviewing a poem that was yet to be posted, but then I realized that it was just @Tuesday and @elysium being brats and titling their poems the same.
“I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then." - Lewis Carroll
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge