I need an editor

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bhargav1
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Thu Jan 24, 2019 10:52 am
bhargav1 says... · Thu Jan 24, 2019 10:52 am
So, I am writing a script for a youtube video, and I need an editor for checking my grammar and for some suggestions. Interested people dm me please.
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trashykawa
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Thu Jan 24, 2019 11:01 am
trashykawa says... · Thu Jan 24, 2019 11:01 am
Hi Bhargav! I'm interested :)
I was eleven years old
and I'd lost my mother,
and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

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