All critiques (no matter how harsh) are definitely appreciated on the above story and any of the following chapters! I'll return any critique I receive to the best of my ability Thanks in advance!
Everyone's digging up old topics today! I guess kitty15's challenge is having effect.
In any case, this should have been locked already. The best to get critiques is by critiquing someone else's work then asking them to return the favor.
Space: the final frontier. These are the voyages of the starship Enterprise. Its five-year mission: to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and new civilizations, to boldly go where no man has gone before. — Captain James T. Kirk