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Rydia
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Sat Nov 10, 2007 7:15 pm
Rydia says... · Sat Nov 10, 2007 7:15 pm
Indeed you are, my friend. Here's one in return -

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Writing Gooder

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The light shines brightest in the darkest places.
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Gadi.
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Sat Nov 10, 2007 7:28 pm
Gadi. says... · Sat Nov 10, 2007 7:28 pm
Kitty's Our Beach.
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
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Gadi.
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Wed Nov 14, 2007 5:47 am
Gadi. says... · Wed Nov 14, 2007 5:47 am
Nobody's doing this. :'(
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
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Jasmine Hart
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Sun Nov 18, 2007 11:01 am
Jasmine Hart says... · Sun Nov 18, 2007 11:01 am
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"The Hidden"
"Just like moons and like suns,
With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes springing high,
Still I'll rise."
-Maya Angelou
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jonny911
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Sun Nov 18, 2007 1:23 pm
jonny911 says... · Sun Nov 18, 2007 1:23 pm
Wait, don't you have to post a new story?

Oh, nevermind. Sorry (I reviewied the Hidden by mistake).
"Son, what do you want to be when you grow up?"
"A felon!"
"Are you sure?"
"Yah! This kid at school says they get all the girls!"
"I should try that..."
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jonny911
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Sun Nov 18, 2007 1:33 pm
jonny911 says... · Sun Nov 18, 2007 1:33 pm
There you go.

Cinderella
"Son, what do you want to be when you grow up?"
"A felon!"
"Are you sure?"
"Yah! This kid at school says they get all the girls!"
"I should try that..."
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Icaruss
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Mon Nov 19, 2007 4:48 pm
Icaruss says... · Mon Nov 19, 2007 4:48 pm
Dangerous Ink (prologue)
there are many problems in our times
but none of them are mine
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Areida
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Sat Nov 24, 2007 7:31 pm
Areida says... · Sat Nov 24, 2007 7:31 pm
Break-up.
Got YWS?

"Most of us have far more courage than we ever dreamed we possessed."
- Dale Carnegie
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Gadi.
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Sat Nov 24, 2007 8:05 pm
Gadi. says... · Sat Nov 24, 2007 8:05 pm
Areida--Sweet Sixteen No More...

:D
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
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BigBadBear
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Sun Nov 25, 2007 1:52 am
BigBadBear says... · Sun Nov 25, 2007 1:52 am
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good job, Gadi!
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.
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Aet Lindling
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Sun Nov 25, 2007 2:03 am
Aet Lindling says... · Sun Nov 25, 2007 2:03 am
(um, don't you mean The Hidden?)
man hands on misery to man
it deepens like a coastal shelf
get out as early as you can
and don’t have any kids yourself.

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BigBadBear
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Sun Nov 25, 2007 5:27 am
BigBadBear says... · Sun Nov 25, 2007 5:27 am
(yeah Sorry I don't know how to do that! *embarrassed*)
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.
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Aet Lindling
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Sun Nov 25, 2007 8:13 am
Aet Lindling says... · Sun Nov 25, 2007 8:13 am
I was referring to the fact that you didn't link to anything, just the posting php form that shows up when you post.
man hands on misery to man
it deepens like a coastal shelf
get out as early as you can
and don’t have any kids yourself.

Legacy signature:
dun worry
it's all gun be k
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Jasmine Hart
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Sun Nov 25, 2007 11:33 am
Jasmine Hart says... · Sun Nov 25, 2007 11:33 am
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"Just like moons and like suns,
With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes springing high,
Still I'll rise."
-Maya Angelou
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BigBadBear
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Sun Nov 25, 2007 4:26 pm
BigBadBear says... · Sun Nov 25, 2007 4:26 pm
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Cinderella

Great job! I loved the poem!
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.
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When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind