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WHERE IS THE STORY?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?! MY HEAD IS ABOUT TO EXPLODE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, 'No hablo ingles.'"




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I took it down. ^^

Eek, I don't think I'm looking for any critiques on this story anymore. Or at least not on the beginning chapters. Thanks anyway for those who critiqued!

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Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach

Moth and Myth <- My comic! :D



"In my contact with people I find that, as a rule, it is only the little, narrow people who live for themselves, who never read good books, who do not travel, who never open up their souls in a way to permit them to come into contact with other souls -- with the great outside world."
— Booker T. Washington, Up From Slavery