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Fri May 29, 2009 8:06 pm
FanClubOfHaters says... · Fri May 29, 2009 8:06 pm
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Fri May 29, 2009 9:16 pm
lysp23 says... · Fri May 29, 2009 9:16 pm
I like the plot, but you really need to use a spell check and reread it. For there are some spelling errors, tense errors and you tend to repeat yourself. However, these are minor errors and once you've added more I'd love to know what comes next.
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