Moments in Mass Silence

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Moments in Mass Silence

The air becomes thick with thought.
It is a moment of prayer.
I can imagine the dense cloud
floating over the heads of the congregation.
It is a smokey purple,
with images quickly flickering about.
Images of sorrow and joy,
and confusion.
I am the only one who looks about,
wondering what thoughts I am barely perceiving.
Last edited by yoha_ahoy on Mon Jan 22, 2007 11:07 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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I like it. You need to add punctuation first before I can determine the flow. Do that and I shall return.
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Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind