I liked this, and your first verse was a capturing few lines that made me want to read the rest. I liked how you built up the agrevation that arises when you can't get to sleep, and one of them is the fact that the crickets are chirping, somewhat louder than usual.
I like how you make out the author to be longing, possibly mourning the lost sight of the moon that night and it added a mystical feel to the piece.
Space: the final frontier. These are the voyages of the starship Enterprise. Its five-year mission: to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and new civilizations, to boldly go where no man has gone before. — Captain James T. Kirk
