"Alive"

[pre]"Alive"

Looking around.
Knowing the world is dark and grey.
Still wanting to be part of it.
Wanting to become real.
The world could be full lucid colors.
But then it'd be a fantasy.
Hold on tight,
Here's a way to fight.
Look at the dullness
and take a stand.
Make the people around you
feel alive.[/pre]

I do like this poem. Its very interesting! Bravo! My complements Kazie!^_^

Thanks i really enjoy when people like my work. i hate that i dont get alot of time to look at others works...