Your poem was very deep and thoughtful. It was very good.
The only thing you need to do, is add puncuation, and capitlize. It made it difficult to read. Which i found sad, because this poem has alot of potential.
I don't care what the miserable excuse is
for showing the death of books, live, on screen.
Men, I could understand; but books! - — Edwin Morgan, From the Video Box 2
