I love this poem! The choice of most of the words clearly conveys the sensuality. Except for the phrase "Made In..." I think that it breaks the flow, and when I think of Made In China, I think of cheap little golden stickers on everything I buy, not a beautiful instrument, worthy of praise. But besides that little detail, the rest of the poem is superb! Very good!
It's crazy how your life can be twisted upside down inside out and around and you can get sushi from safeway still looking like a normal person — starchild314
