Ode to Jam

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Goldenheart
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Thu May 01, 2008 8:14 pm
Goldenheart says... · Thu May 01, 2008 8:14 pm
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Last edited by Goldenheart on Wed Apr 13, 2011 3:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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God
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Thu May 01, 2008 9:08 pm
God says... · Thu May 01, 2008 9:08 pm
loved it, the rhyme scheme is great, subject matter is good, jam is great. W00T!!! GO JAM
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zoeybird13024
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Thu May 01, 2008 11:21 pm
zoeybird13024 says... · Thu May 01, 2008 11:21 pm
Awww, how cute! I love it when I read cutesy, makes-you-smile poetry! It reminds me of an adorable children's book--have you ever considered writing children's books? I think you'd--no, I know you'd be--very good at it! I found nothing wrong with this at all--not even any nitpicks!
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sweetcapris
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Thu May 01, 2008 11:22 pm
sweetcapris says... · Thu May 01, 2008 11:22 pm
hahahahha, you really had me laughing. a cinch to spell, haha I love it. I think I'm gonna go write a cutesy rhyme-y poem now. Thanks for the inspiration!

made my day. :]
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Charliebo
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Fri May 02, 2008 10:09 pm
Charliebo says... · Fri May 02, 2008 10:09 pm
My god! It's genius! It flowed like a dream and the words were well chosen.

I am pleased to say that i have no critisism!

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Goldenheart
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Tue May 13, 2008 12:26 am
Goldenheart says... · Tue May 13, 2008 12:26 am
Thank you! I had wondered, before posting, whether or not it was 'legal' to repost a piece of writing, extended or not. I hope I have not broken some sort of rule!

Goldie
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