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Wet Flowers

Lindsaroo · 2007-11-17T17:15:46Z

What would you say to me If I told you I loved you? Would you smile and kiss me Right then and there? Would you hold me in your arms? Would you stroke my face and say You loved me too? Or would avoid my eyes and walk away? Would you stop talking to me And ignore my calls and tears? Would you have the heart to say That you couldn't love a girl like me? So you'd leave to hide from me And find a better girl? Well I'm tired of wondering Tired of having these thoughts I want to know I need to know I looked around for you All day I searched My heart was burning to tell you I just couldn't take it any longer I gave up once it started to rain And it was no longer bright So I just walked home To find you at my door Your hair was drenched And so were the flowers in your hand I walked up to you And looked questioningly at you You just pushed the wet flowers at me "Take them." You begged "Please take them and tell me you love me." I smiled and said "I love you."

qirrat awan

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Thu Jun 26, 2008 4:20 pm

qirrat awan says... · Thu Jun 26, 2008 4:20 pm

great job !
i guess the you started with a little fidgeting but recovered down the way!
its lovely to read something like that because it reminds of love lives of people!

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