My First Poem

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well, im not a big acrostic fan, but this was pretty good, 'specially if its your first poem. and i loved the theme, being the tree-hugging hippie that i am...
"I myself am composed entirely of flaws, stitched together with good intentions."- Augusten Burroughs




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I like this, this is good.
Just another quack spouting psychobabble.

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What really knocks me out is a book that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though.
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