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Button
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Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:07 am
Button says... · Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:07 am
Sorry :/
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untameabletiger
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Fri Jul 09, 2010 8:30 am
untameabletiger says... · Fri Jul 09, 2010 8:30 am
I love this Piece! It flows throughout the poem, but try to use more punctuation. (:

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jamesMarcus
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Fri Jul 09, 2010 9:51 am
jamesMarcus says... · Fri Jul 09, 2010 9:51 am
hello my name is James!
I adore nature poems basically because they are really soothing for my mind and you'rs really hit the spot. hahah. anyway i really like the point of the poem and that is natural water. you should have written more i think i can see you'r power of observations.
if you have any quaries about my review
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