My Pencil

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Kwantack
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Sat Jan 22, 2011 7:03 pm
Kwantack says... · Sat Jan 22, 2011 7:03 pm
I know how you feel with this. Pencils get lost so frequently...anyway, I enjoyed reading this. The only thing would be that the second stanza has sort of a different flow to it than the others, I think...it seems a little different, but if you like it then keep it. Keep writing!
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Kiaya
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Fri Mar 18, 2011 2:41 am
Kiaya says... · Fri Mar 18, 2011 2:41 am
hahaha so cute. I understand the feeling. When I write I excape my pain and can go anywhere. I hate when my pencil runs away. I can't think anything to say to help except, keep writing. ;)
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Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:57 am
cupcake says... · Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:57 am
This is cute. I loved it. Pencils run away from me too. It almost seems like I repel pencils. It's great to read a poem that isn't sad or depressing. Anyway, great poem and keep up the good work. :D
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cj2344
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Sun Mar 20, 2011 12:24 am
cj2344 says... · Sun Mar 20, 2011 12:24 am
this is a really unique poem because usually all the poems i read are all serious and intense. but this was really light hearted and i loved it. it was so cute and i also loved the rhyming.
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I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault