I can't think of any improvements that can be made, so I'll skip to what I like. It flows easily, and really catches your attention. The content is just amazing. All in all a great poem!
- Liz
Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia. ~E.L. Doctorow
To have more, you have to become more. Don't wish it was easier - wish you were better. For things to change, you have to change, and for things to get better, you have to get better. — Jim Rohn
Good work.
