Hello! First and foremost, I absolutely loved this poem. However, you might want to consider changing the title. It was a little misleading to me. When I read the title, I expected the poem to be about the death of a loved one or something and how soon they become a memory (but instead I found this lovely poem!) You might want to change the title to something about how our entire life is just a series of images or how nothing ever lasts for too long, they just become memories. I don't know, that's just me. The title does fit a little, but I guess to me it was misleading. I did enjoy reading it. It's dramatic yet simple (the best kind). Don't stop writing, you're doing great!
"A story doesn't have to always reflect reality; it can create reality as well." -- David Levithan.
I'll admit the two turtle doves are growing on me, but there are ten birds in this house already and we both know geese are feathered bioweapons of mass destruction. — Silvern
I can't find anything bad to say about it, so, well done. 
