Seven PM haiku

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the clock chimes seven
I sense my impending doom
then my date drives up
Holding pasts in ash black earth
Bound by roots
Roots into sand
Grow towards the giver




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AHAHA
I'm sorry that was kinda funny though.
Honestly, it was funny, short, simple, just like a haiku should be.
I liked it... Nothing I could help with without turning it against it's haiku self... Nice :)



All truly wise thoughts have been thought already thousands of times; but to make them truly ours, we must think them over again honestly, till they take root in our personal experience.
— Johann Wolfgang von Goethe