A Time of Change

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Nameless_And_Shamed
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Sun Jan 08, 2006 4:46 am
Nameless_And_Shamed says... · Sun Jan 08, 2006 4:46 am
Winter breeze wraps 'round
Autumn trees as cold air sweeps
Up yesterdays leaves.
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Sun Jan 08, 2006 5:59 pm
yoha_ahoy says... · Sun Jan 08, 2006 5:59 pm
Another good haiku. Good idea at least, but your first line is 6 syllables long.
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Sun Jan 08, 2006 6:01 pm
Nameless_And_Shamed says... · Sun Jan 08, 2006 6:01 pm
Oh, thanks.
I think I fixed it right.
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